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It’s Gone MAG

June 11, 2014
By jwillyy45 BRONZE, Smithtown, New York
jwillyy45 BRONZE, Smithtown, New York
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And when I opened my blinds, I saw the flowers on the trees.
And so I went to sleep for a while.
and, yes, I cried and yelled.
and then the love went away.
and things happened I cannot speak of.
and so I loved him.
and I began to like him.
and I met this boy.
In the winter.


The author's comments:
This piece is meant to be read backwards to show that anything can happen. It depends on how you look at it to see if it is positive or negative.

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on Jan. 28 2015 at 4:38 pm
lucybrown SILVER, Blacksburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
The wastebasket is a writer's best friend. ~Isaac Bashevis Singer

First things first, but not necessarily in that order. ~ From Doctor Who

This is a really cool poem! I think how it's backwards is really unique; I haven't seen anything like it before. It sounds good either way, backwards or forwards. Really great job and congrats on getting published in the magazine :D