Fish of thought MAG

June 8, 2014
By unicornpower PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
unicornpower PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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They swim in the puddles in my head,
Keeping me from sleep in the night,
Turning shadows in the moonlight
To men with bloody knives,
Monsters with teeth of sharpened steel,
Giant spiders looking for a meal

Sometimes they make me shy
Sometimes they make me cry
Sometimes they make me wish to die

But I always feed my fish of thought,
Always change their water
And check their scales for rot.



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on Jun. 28 2014 at 1:59 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Fantastically original and clever. Nice job!

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2014 at 10:59 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

Really simple, deep and meaningful poem. I loved it and can absolutely relate! :)

on Jun. 17 2014 at 5:44 pm
unicornpower PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Wow guys thanks so much!

on Jun. 17 2014 at 5:26 pm
DreamersJourney SILVER, Old Massett, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The best thing you can do is the right thing, the next best thing you can do is the wrong thing. The worst thing you can do is nothing."
"Decide to have an attitude of gratitude, you can become bitter or better."
"beYOUtiful, everyone else is taken."

Your work is awesome

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2014 at 3:33 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

Absolutely brilliant poetry! I cant believe this isnt the most commented article on Teenink, because the metaphors and imagery used in this are just amazing! good work 


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