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why are people so cruel?
for no reason but the joy in hurting others?
to get pleasure from such pain
unthinkable

I am not cruel
I mean no harm

however
the ends justify the means

unthinkable (for evil is evil)
necessary (for you, sir, are as evil as I)



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WOWritingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 1 at 12:39 pm:
I like the meaning behind this, but I don't see the point of the brackets at the end and the fact that none of the first words are capitalized annoys me. However, I like the emotive language and it's very true. I also love the picture that goes with this, very appropriate :)
 
Love2Read72This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 1:41 pm :
All I can say, look at the poem "i carry your heart(i carry it in" by e.e. cummings. It is beautiful. It's where I got the inspiration for the parentheses.
 
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VeganFeminist_WriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 25 at 10:48 pm:
Love the language used, keep on writing.
 
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