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My Love..

May 5, 2014
By Steven_Hyde GOLD, Auburn, New York
Steven_Hyde GOLD, Auburn, New York
17 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just Do It"
- Nike
"An eye for an eye only makes the world blind"
- Ghandi


I thought I had you in my grip
but you left, abandoned me
I let the blood on my arm drip
through the darkness I try to see

that same mistake was the last straw
I thought you would come back
but I see of you no more
all that I see now is coal black

the memories are cold
they lost their last breath
of nothing to be told
they whisper their death

seen whats lost, I see what I had
my heart is breaking
I see you are glad
my heart is aching

I miss you
I love you
I need you
I want you

but you're not here
not anymore
thin is the air
you close the last door

you fade in the mist
your fading away
I take my wrist
all I see is grey

without you I know
that I'm not strong
I let my blood flow
I haven't seen you for so long

I know our mistake
it repeated the hurt
my heart got its take
it ended up in the dirt

so the road ended here
I see you fade
you disappear
tears fall down my face



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on Sep. 20 2014 at 10:38 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

This was amazing, I would say more but I can't find the words to explain it.

on Jun. 11 2014 at 9:47 am
Castiels.Freaking.Trenchcoat SILVER, Columbiana, Ohio
9 articles 7 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Family don't end with blood, boy." ~Bobby (Supernatural)

Oh, wow! I loved it! It's beautiful. the only advise I'd give you is to make every first letter of every new line, capitol. But other than that, great job! 

on May. 28 2014 at 8:08 am
Steven_Hyde GOLD, Auburn, New York
17 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just Do It"
- Nike
"An eye for an eye only makes the world blind"
- Ghandi

This was supposed to be free verse. The words that rhyme are nearly a coincidenc

on May. 23 2014 at 4:37 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

most of your beginning stanzas lack rythm but u get better near the end  

on May. 23 2014 at 8:57 am
nikkifuentes BRONZE, Wimauma, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.” _




Albert Einstein

damn steven that nice i love it sad thou but still ill win you in football                             -nikkifuentes