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Doubting Want and Sacrificed Love

I realize again.
Nothing works out.
Why God, why me?
I try not to shout.

As soon as I'm happy
And cry tears of joy;
My sunshine is stolen,
Sacrificed for a boy.

I try not to cry
These many tears of pain.
But think of what happened,
And what good I could gain.

I wasn't the one,
But when am I ever?
Is it possible for me to find love?
To even live happy forever?

But why do I bother?
I know nothing works out.
I want to believe in love,
But then why do I doubt?



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Nelly_NellThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 15 at 9:55 pm:
Omg i really loved this poem it has a lot of actuall meaning in it. your a great writer keep it up :)
 
Nella.Girl97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
today at 11:21 am :
THanks for much Nelly! Thanks for reading and commenting!
 
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taliamaee said...
May 28 at 9:22 pm:
this is really beautiful. thank you for this. :)
 
Nella.Girl97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
today at 11:20 am :
Aw thank you! I'm glad you liked it! That means a lot!
 
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devanshshah0210 said...
May 21 at 6:07 pm:
It's really nice and meaningful
 
Nella.Girl97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 21 at 6:08 pm :
thanks a lot!
 
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DragonAmericaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18 at 10:03 pm:
Wow, this was amazing! XD
 
Nella.Girl97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 21 at 5:49 pm :
Thank you! This poem means a lot to me...
 
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