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Let the Silence speak
May 8, 2014
Let’s let the silence speak,
And not let our secret leak.
Let’s not allow the words to fall
And let only our eyes speak it all.
Let’s have the doors closed,
And let’s not let the wind steal our love;
But let’s have the windows open
And let its aroma spread in the world.
Let’s let the distances fade in the oblivion,
And let our hearts draw closer their companion.
Let’s let the intimacy find its way to our caress
And leave enduring marks in the boundless.
Let’s let the music rule
And take away all the sour;
Let’s let the static hold
And keep us bound with scads of adore!
© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA
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This article has 5 comments.
just_another_girl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2014 at 3:43 am
I absoloutly love this. The words paint such an amazing picture. You truly have a talent.
Leviathan123 GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2014 at 12:33 pm
Wow. After reading this poem I am truly speechless. You have a beautiful way with words!! Your poem reminds me how to live life:) please check out and coomment/ rate my stuff thanks!
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 1 2014 at 4:38 pm
this is beautiful and very true and relatable! Great job! XD Could you give me some feedback? I would really appreicate it. :) TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/692285/My-Friends/
KandiceMichelle PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2014 at 1:39 pm
I love the way you can rhyme! I am so jealous!! This was really good by the way :) I loved the your first stanza the most though :D keep on writing -Kandice
Opticalillusion DIAMOND said...
on May. 12 2014 at 6:42 am
I thought this poem was intresting, It had some truth in the lines. My favorite line was the last stanza "Let the music rule and take away all the sour; Let's let the static hold And keep us bound with scads of adore." I thought it was a good thought provoker. But I would like to inquire on the minor issues with the article, Since they are minor. And is not capitalized unless it is the first word to the sentance and there is no period where and is used. "And take away all the sour; Let's let-" Let's is not captialized either. there are a few other minor gramatical mistakes but nothing really that I should digress into. Anyhow overall this is a good piece, I give it a good 4 out of 5 rating and that is only due to it's lack of structural perfection; but anyhow marvelous job, keep up the good reads.
