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I watch this flame pass
from match to wick,
gently stepping over
a great divide.
This flame and I
are not so different:
it comes into being from nothingness;
it eats and grows, smokes, and rests.
It gets angry,
destroys homes,
consumes flesh.
Sated, it becomes calm,
retreats into coals,
smoldering through the night.
Domesticated
by a piece of string,
it makes its home in a cave of wax.
It chases the shadows away
and stands watch through the night.
It sways
and dances in the darkness
before it is extinguished
in the blink
of an eye.

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WR1T3R said...
Apr. 23 at 7:35 pm:
I loved it! You did a wonderful job! =)
 
KelliBThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 15 at 11:28 am :
I understand. NO judgement here. Great job!
 
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satellite23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 23 at 6:59 pm:
Very desciptive, but a bit cliche and boring.
 
pianokeysevieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 15 at 9:18 am :
i would have said the same if this was any longer, but i liked the length.. i didn't find it boring
 
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kyrireeseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 23 at 2:43 pm:
Brilliant.
 
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Whitney S. said...
Apr. 23 at 1:13 pm:
I thought the context was very well written. The word usage was very good and it was also very descriptive.
 
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lonleygal said...
Apr. 23 at 11:07 am:
there are so many times i feel the same way I love how you are not afraid to let your feelings out
 
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IndiloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 23 at 7:57 am:
Great visualization Great description Great overall work VERY well done!!!!
 
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logo1234This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 18 at 11:02 pm:
I really like how you related yourself to the flames. Very good description, made it easy to visualize in my head.  I definitely feel that it resembles a candle, bright one second and gone the next.
 
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Light_WalkerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 12 at 7:19 am:
I have felt the same. You have captured how many people feel in their life perfectly. I hope your flame will burn forever bright!
 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 3 at 6:31 pm:
I understand.
 
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dragonfly95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 1 at 10:03 am:
this beatifuly written...i am sorry for the pain you have felt and expressed in this poem...very well expressed, please check out my work sometime.thanks!
 
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beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 1 at 9:54 am:
I like this piece---the idea of the speaker finding resemblance with a natural element, such as water or fire attracts my attention. Usually, when fire is introduced in a poem it is associated with destruction or ot of control. This was not the case, and I must say I was pleasantly surprised.
 
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GittaRThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 1 at 4:55 am:
I don't judge, I understand completly and as I read that poem my own memories....which I am sure are similiar to yours burned through. This is an amazing piece, I totally get it.
 
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eddys96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17 at 8:41 pm:
i like this poem. its very hot
 
12zebraluv replied...
Mar. 10 at 10:00 pm :
This resembles me by so much
 
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NLURHSThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17 at 9:26 am:
That was amazing I loved it, it just flowed, I could really imagine a flame when reading your poem, just simply amazing :D
 
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HiddenAngelInTheDarkThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 4 at 9:08 am:
Beautiful and we can all be like an object such as a cloud or a wave or even the rain
 
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Kingdom_of_the_ForgottenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 26 at 10:38 pm:
This is really good. The work of a genius who knows how to get their point across to people.
 
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KateLAThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 26 at 9:03 pm:
Wow, I just loved this-you are a master at poem writing, gave it 5/5 of course!
 
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living_undefined said...
Jan. 26 at 6:44 pm:
Reading this poem i imagined a girl litteraly being the flame. and the flame moving as if a mind of its own then in the end i saw a flame make its way into a "cave of wax" then in the cave i saw a girl on fire dancing. I really love this poem :) keep writeing
 
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EternallyMe03This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 26 at 11:28 am:
I truly appreciate this poem. It is very unique in that it can relate to many people. Simple, yet powerful.
 
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AlexisNicole822This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 26 at 10:46 am:
This is amazing. I completely understand the similiarities. And I most definitely agree, I feel this way at times as well. Excellent job(:
 
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amber603 said...
Jan. 4 at 6:03 pm:
This is one of the best poems i have seen in a while! Great job!
 
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Forgotten_SaintThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 4:05 pm:
This is a great poem. And I loved the analogies you put in it
 
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K.T.Bugg said...
Jan. 4 at 12:46 pm:
Love this poem! Very very good! :) It's very touching and true! i love it :) keep up the awesome work!
 
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His_Baby_Girl19This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 11:48 am:
I love this poem. And especially how it represents you. The beauty within this poem can only come out of the courageous and lonely beauty's. You may not be alone, but do not let your inner wick distinguish.....You may never been able to enlighten it again...
 
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kairi.kaylynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 10:38 am:
This was really good. I loved how you described the flame and then made it to describe you.
 
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LilZo11This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 9:56 am:
wow that is really good interesting how you connected those two i love the analogy its really well written
 
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poet.loverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 9:23 am:
I really love all the emotion and truth that lies within this poem! Amazing work! try reading some of my poetry sometime, thanks :)
 
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Joshua.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 3:04 am:
Great! I really like it!
 
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heather_marieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 12:15 pm:
i understand completly my life has been estinguished many times and then light up again a short while. i love how fire can chase away the dark. and can keep me safe.
 
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Fia-fiaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 9:58 am:

Truly wonderful! It is very interesting how u connected life to a candle, which is not untrue... thank you!

:)

 
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xo19brandee93xo said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 7:26 am:
That was great! :D
 
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Violet said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 7:19 pm:
This has to be one of my favorite poems on teen ink!  Keep up your amazingness!!!!!!   :)
 
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Nick said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 5:27 pm:
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! That was extremily awesome! Keep it up!
 
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BrynaJoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 4:42 pm:
This was awesome!
 
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RedFeatherThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 7:32 am:

That's a beautiful poem! I love the comparison of a person's life to a candle flame! I'm going to share this with my friends if you don't mind.

Check out some of my work sometime, will ya? KW! ^_^

 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 5:43 pm:
Beautiful comparison! I love the way it's written, by the way. Very relatable, too. Powerful. All around, it's an awesome poem!
 
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NYClove13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 12:22 pm:
This poem was absolutely incredible! It was relatable, and if it wasn't for the fact that it was posted on this website I would've thought it was written by a professional poet! Great job!
 
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alwaysbrokenhearted said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 6:04 pm:
so true! keep writing. and i'm sooo tagging this as a favorite!!!
 
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WeAllBurnThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 1:20 pm:
agreed <3.
 
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Mimi15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 9:02 pm:
CHECK OUT MY WORKKK. K, thanks :)
 
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bamboom212This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 10:42 am:
Butiful ! (;
 
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WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDiedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 8:54 am:
Beautiful. i have work on here i would really appreciate it if you guys can check it out and tell me what you think. Thanks :)
 
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cookiegirl said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 4:50 am:
I like how you use cnadle light to represent your life: )  Your words are powerful.  
 
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live-laugh-love said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 1:25 pm:
This is very lovely and moving. I can feel where you're coming from. I love it.
 
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RhythmAndRhyme said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 12:25 pm:
Great use of description and comparison. I totally felt like I was this flame, and it was me....very cool.
 
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Alan said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 6:15 am:
This is lovely, touching. I feel you. beautiful piece!
 
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EllimeeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 11:55 am:
I'm labeling this unique, interesting, realistic, creative.... oh, and five-stars!
 
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