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Dreams of him, in my subconcious

April 24, 2014
By AshIsAVampire GOLD, Lake City, Florida
AshIsAVampire GOLD, Lake City, Florida
14 articles 10 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Would you destroy something beautiful in order to make it perfect?"

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I was roaming this earth a solo lone wolf without a care,
then "it" hit me.
Only "it" was a he and his eyes made contact,
He stared straight ahead as if she had lost track,
my heart I would give him,
his smile he would give me.
We would run off into the sunset happily,
because darling when I see you my mind drifts off for a second....

..... Your smile it kills me,
your eyes they heal me,
the body of a god as perfect as could be.
You stood out of the crowd,
the other guys are dust clouds,
getting in the way of the most amazing guy around.
I may not know what the future holds
but I see you and I our souls entwined....

..... Your eyes shine brighter than any star,
stars burn out trying to get to you,
and some stars die out but your eyes never will,
no one will ever take the light behind your eyes.
Your smile is perfect, always melting my heart when I see it.
Now, darling I want to ask you something,
will you be mine?



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Beila BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2015 at 1:45 am
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

Aww, this is beautiful! I would say yes just for the poetry! :) Seriously, I love the way that the stanzas are distinct from one another and yet form this natural progression toward the lovely conclusion. In a couple places, I think the rhyme was forced, such as "crowd... dust clouds." However, overall, the sentiment shines through like a smile, warm and pleasant to look at. :)