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April 28, 2014
By BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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Sometimes he loves you,
Sometimes he hates you.
Sometimes you cruise your way through things,
Other times the whole world is against you.
A question you just knew the answer to,
A score you just managed to get,
When time runs out by just a second,
When you say the wrong thing by accident,
Just hope
That this time,
He will be there for you.

© Carollynn G., Hawthorne, NY

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This article has 12 comments.

BlurAngel GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2014 at 8:50 am
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

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Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

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I LOVE this, its also soo TRUE
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 10:19 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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Thanks for your feedback!
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 10:19 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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Thanks!             
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 10:15 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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Thanks!           
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 9:59 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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thank you!
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 9:51 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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amazing work
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 9:51 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
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i really liked this it sounds as though ur talking about a chance of different things happening  
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 12:48 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Thanks so much! I really appreciate it! :)
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 12:45 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Thank you so, so much! It means a lot! :)
TheComet PLATINUM said...
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So awesome !! I love this poem it's so true....Luck is an unfaithful friend that's what I think Great job keep writing and i'll keep checking on your work cuz you certainly have a talent
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
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More real than solid earth;
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But only another birth"
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I like this, I especially like the fact that luck is a being :) Great job! XD
EnderBean BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2014 at 7:33 pm
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I enjoyed this one.