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peeling back the
blue tuesday
sky the
absence of everything
tore through my heart.
our orange wall
disfigured my imagination
and what I thought was
love
was but imagination;
disfigured, distraught
with eternal fulminating.
ah, the potency of
poetic cogitation!

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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callie15 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 6:47 pm
i loved how you ended it. great job!brava!
 
sethmeyerslover1234 said...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 6:09 pm
wow.......... thats all i have to say. 
 
Carmel94 said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 7:21 pm
I freakin LOVE this poem
 
Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 2:35 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 10:09 pm
This is very beautiful. Good job! If you have time, please check out my work. Comment and rate please!
 
Jenny L. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 8:28 pm
stunning.
absolutely, stunning.
 
hanah W. said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 3:33 pm
that was really good i really like it you def have ur own style
 
hanah W. said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 3:33 pm
that was really good i really like it you def have ur own style
 
AmnyR said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 12:51 pm
wow, this was really good. at first i just didnt expect it to be (you know how many depressed love poems are quite horribly written and cliche) but this was great. thanks for surpassing my expectations!
 
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