soul MAG

November 27, 2008
By Sarah Weiskittel GOLD, North Bend, Ohio
Sarah Weiskittel GOLD, North Bend, Ohio
13 articles 0 photos 1 comment

i took
the half empty glass
of my
soul
and held it out to you
poured it into your lap
when all i wanted to do was
hide

but then i looked up
and realized that maybe
it was not as
important
as i thought
because you were turned away
and didn’t even feel it
spill onto you

maybe it was
only tears,
only water
after all



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KayRae GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2015 at 12:43 pm
KayRae GOLD, Arlington Hts, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat.

I love this! great work!

on Jul. 9 2012 at 4:26 pm
mindless_dreaming BRONZE, Wyckoff, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"May make my heart as a millstone, set my face as a flint, Cheat and be cheated, and die: who knows? We are ashes and we are dust." -Alfred, Lord Tennyson, 'Maud'

Wow I really liked this - beautiful

on Jul. 23 2011 at 12:18 pm
devikaarora GOLD, New Delhi, Hawaii
17 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont tell me sky is the limit when there are footsteps on the moon !

Woah !
This was awesome!
Had such a deep meaning...

 


gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2011 at 6:11 pm
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
17 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

all the poems in this mag are great  sarah w. ur great i love ur work

on Dec. 15 2010 at 7:38 am
Alisha62293 BRONZE, Warwick, Rhode Island
2 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life." Charles Darwin

You did an amazing job =) it was very insightful and was very deep. keep up the good work

on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:37 pm
caseyemd SILVER, Old Saybrook, Connecticut
7 articles 4 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life is beautiful..."- Vega 4

This poem really touches deep. I know how the narrator feels. When you give someone everything and you still can't help them...I love this.

on Sep. 18 2010 at 7:20 pm
CammyLashay SILVER, Java, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Failure is not for me.

Loved the poem

LilBoo BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2010 at 10:42 pm
LilBoo BRONZE, Martinsville, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments
Wow this was really good. I feel you on this one

jimmy_a GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2009 at 1:52 pm
jimmy_a GOLD, Sanford, North Carolina
12 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Look for me, not with a flashlight but open your heart n free your soul n there my love i shall be

whoa deep im blown away lolz good poem

on Nov. 9 2009 at 2:36 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

on Aug. 30 2009 at 11:45 pm
aspiring.author.09 PLATINUM, Beaumont, Other
34 articles 0 photos 70 comments
Quite amazing, this was a very well written piece. Keep it up!

on Aug. 30 2009 at 9:42 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I love this poem!!! Great Job! Check out my work sometime! Thanks a billion!!! <3

given lie said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 8:35 pm
I like the pesimistic mood of the relationship in your poem. Kudos to Sarah W.

on Aug. 30 2009 at 7:19 pm
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
14 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't remember it clearly, but it went something like this:

"The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present."

I really like that :)

on Aug. 30 2009 at 7:11 pm
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
23 articles 5 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

so sad!!!!


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