Residue This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I hope
there's a place
where my trite words
can dwell
to become
the iridescent values
I always intended

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Godinspiresher43 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2014 at 11:59 pm
Thank you! I appreciate your comment and feedback. I kind of messed up the author's comment so I resubmitted my poem again to fix it. Haha yeah it was driving me nuts. :)
 
elycavill This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2014 at 3:40 pm
I like how you explained what you said in "The author's comment" in the poem, how you put that want underneath the verses, and I didn't need the comment on the side to see into it. And it is what I appreciate , the ability to say something you mean, undirectly with writing. Good job.  5/5*
 
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