Residue MAG

April 19, 2014
By theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Can't keep my eyes from the circling sky,
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earth-bound misfit, I"
~Pink Floyd

"Now is blessed
The rest
remembered "

~Jim Morrison


I hope
there's a place
where my trite words
can dwell
to become
the iridescent values
I always intended


The author's comments:
I want always of my poetry leftovers to be used someday.

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on Jul. 8 2014 at 11:59 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Can't keep my eyes from the circling sky,
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earth-bound misfit, I"
~Pink Floyd

"Now is blessed
The rest
remembered "

~Jim Morrison

Thank you! I appreciate your comment and feedback. I kind of messed up the author's comment so I resubmitted my poem again to fix it. Haha yeah it was driving me nuts. :)

on Jul. 8 2014 at 3:40 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

I like how you explained what you said in "The author's comment" in the poem, how you put that want underneath the verses, and I didn't need the comment on the side to see into it. And it is what I appreciate , the ability to say something you mean, undirectly with writing. Good job.  5/5*


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