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Sickness MAG

By Anonymous

You wreak black
like nightfall.
You words are
dark and sharp.
You spear hearts
to see them bleed.
You run wild
with the sun
which so willingly
burns you.
Your harsh words
have never echoed
so clear and sound
with the wind.
Your words dug
gashes in the moon
and light the sky.
Dark looms and
has never hesitated.
We wonder why



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TAR11 SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 8:34 am
TAR11 SILVER, Allison Park, Pennsylvania
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Nice poem.  Please check out mine From the Hilltop and Anonymous' Inferno. 

on Jun. 23 2011 at 8:33 am
authormercedes SILVER, Macedon, New York
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a stage and most of us are desperately unrehearsed"

This poem gave me chills! I completely adore it ;]

on Apr. 18 2011 at 9:07 pm
my.freedom.lies.in.free.verse PLATINUM, Tosa, Wisconsin
24 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm in love with you, and I know that love is just a shout into a void, and that oblivion is inevitable... and I know the sun will swallow the only earth we'll ever have, and I am in love with you." Augustus Waters

this is great! the short lines kept me interesting and i luv when poetry has dark sides! keep it up!

on Apr. 18 2011 at 4:35 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

This is so relateable! Great topic choice. I really hope you keep on writing. 8) BTW, if you have time, please check out, comment on, and rate my poems, The Girl Inside, Remembering Spring, and You Are the Lyrics in Me. Thanks so much! 8)

on Mar. 31 2011 at 11:27 am
Young_Poet_AEP BRONZE, Windham, New Hampshire
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never, Never Give Up.

This peom could be a song. Almost every teen can connect to this poem.

Auburn BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 9:59 pm
Auburn BRONZE, Topeka, Kansas
4 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I tell myself lie after lie and I play the part of a girl with many different hearts but none of them were ever meant to hurt you.

i really like this poem, good job. you're a great writer :)

 


on Mar. 5 2011 at 7:08 pm
CWells_521 DIAMOND, Greene, New York
81 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best things in life are unseen, that's why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream.
What doesn't kill you, only makes you stronger.

Wow, I really love this. it's very deep and meaningful, great job!!

on Feb. 11 2011 at 11:35 pm
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
57 articles 25 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't leap you'lll never know what it's like to fly"

beautiful!!!! and very well written! also, nice word choice!

on Feb. 11 2011 at 3:41 pm
AmillamissPriscilla GOLD, Randolph, Maine
12 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do what you love in the most adventurous way and make sure it helps people.

much agreed... do you know how much emotion is in this? Can you feel the power in every word? ig not. Maybe if you would read the poem then you would have an appreciation for it.

soccerchic38 said...
on Feb. 11 2011 at 5:49 am
soccerchic38, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Agreed.  Please respect the writer and write about her poem, not on your life revolving around it.  

on Jan. 27 2011 at 9:16 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
30 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

wow.......wow i love this, it hit home with me.......... awesome job!!!!! keep writing!!!

on Jan. 20 2011 at 2:53 pm
blackrabbit GOLD, Norfolk, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let it Go"

Makes me curious

 


on Jan. 20 2011 at 1:30 pm
greenday21luvsbilliejoe, New Sweden, Maine
0 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
I Need To Start To Be Myself, Cause' I'm Sick Of Everyone Else- Broken Man- Boys Like Girls

thats really mean to say. i thought it was a great poem

vaper said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 11:54 pm
ugh my teacher is making me do a responce on this

on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:26 pm
theonewhosalwaysthere, Sterling, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
People who have no weaknesses are terrible; there is no way of taking advantage of them.
Anatole France

Wow! You crafted the words geat...!

summerqdp GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 6:40 pm
summerqdp GOLD, Dana Point, California
10 articles 12 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A friend in need is a friend indeed, a friend with weed is better."
"Then he put on forty-two and a half tabs of brown acid that he still had from his Woodstock days. She saw all kinds of colors. Lemon yellow, orange orange, cherry red, kaleidoscope eyes. The world was on fire."

Very nice! I loved it completely. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Bravo!

on Oct. 30 2010 at 4:12 pm
I love it! it's really deep it speaks 2 me alot keep writing

on Oct. 24 2010 at 10:24 am
c_taylor BRONZE, Pendleto, Oregon
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live, laugh, love

I love this, it's beautiful and edgy! I'm going to set it as one of my favorites. Check out some of my work! Majestic, look up and cry, and loosing.

on Sep. 10 2010 at 4:25 pm
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER, Okawville, Illinois
9 articles 3 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
If it doesnt break your heart it isnt love, if it doesnt break your heart its not enough. Its when youre breaking down with your insides coming out.Thats when you learn what youre made of.-Switchfoot<3

OHMYGOD!!!!! Ummmm...shutup u shuld rele jus shutup and keep your lovely little comments to yourself. This poem was amazing:) very beautiful

on Sep. 10 2010 at 4:00 pm
Meghan Hammond BRONZE, Winchester, Virginia
4 articles 11 photos 6 comments
that is really good!! i loved it!