Just to Let You Know MAG

By MaryEllen, CT, Middletown, CT

Your butchering words
In the beginning
Went through my head
As a child who listens
To every word you say

Your constant sarcasm
Your words which
I thought were the truth
The never giving up

Just to let you know, Dad
Those butchering words
To me are now worthless
For I know now
It was only your sickness



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on Dec. 5 2011 at 4:04 pm
classof20142121 GOLD, Torrington, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
You laugh because I am different ,but I laugh because you are all the same .

I  Love  ,Love this . Hey u  should read and comment on my work.

iCreate SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:37 pm
iCreate SILVER, Vidor, Texas
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uhm lol...its a free verse.

there is no rhyme scheme?

 


on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:31 pm
ebj.2014 PLATINUM, St. John, Washington
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Beautiful writing. You expressed your emotions and feelings perfectly and it definitely deserved to be published! Congrats! Anybody who reads this...could you please check out some of my poems? I would love some comments and feedback! For every comment I get, I'll comment on yours too! Thanks! :)

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:27 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

5 star so definetly

on Nov. 25 2011 at 12:35 pm
albanke4 BRONZE, Lincoln, Nebraska
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Very nice poem

on Nov. 25 2011 at 10:07 am
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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This was a good poem. I was really meaningful and thoughtful.

Gee-Gee SILVER said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 1:04 pm
Gee-Gee SILVER, MarkedTree, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
if you dont like me get over it

this was really good i absolutly loved it!!!!

 

would anyone mind checking out my work please?

 


on Nov. 3 2011 at 7:43 pm
SophieG. SILVER, St. Davids, Pennsylvania
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I like it, very meaningful! Please check out my poems!

hotchick1 said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 9:27 am
i think the book darkness before dawn is a awsome book i just hate that keyshia got to feel sad for the rest of her life

on Nov. 3 2011 at 8:35 am
AmayaSakaruta, Borger, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
From out of the night that covers me, black as the pit from pole to pole, i thank whatever gods may be, for my unconquerable soul. -William Earnest Henley
Though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I shall fear no evil. -the Bible

I totally relate to you, because the same sort of thing happened with my dad. nicely done.

would anyone please check out my work? thank you...


GaelicC said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 3:24 am
GaelicC, Longford, Other
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Favorite Quote:
No -Rosa Parks

I love your poem, keep writing!

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 8:22 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

This is great, there's so much emotion here, it's just amazing. Would anyone mind checking out my work? Please?

on Oct. 12 2011 at 4:04 pm
Sophia-Lynn Ellis BRONZE, Mattapoisett, Massachusetts
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my goodness! this is very well written! i really like how even thought i didnt pick out an exact rhyme sceme that in the end it did end up rhyming, and for that i applaud you. very nice piece

on Oct. 12 2011 at 5:41 am
Caban37104 BRONZE, Vineland, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
You all laugh at me because I'm different, yet I laugh at you because you're all the same.

I love ittt.. Its great =] Keep up the good work 

 

Would everyone mind checking out my work and letting me know what you think? Id greatly appreciate it.! 


Alicey BRONZE said...
on Sep. 20 2011 at 9:30 pm
Alicey BRONZE, Mount Hermon, Massachusetts
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i just absolutely love it!

glimmer BRONZE said...
on Sep. 20 2011 at 9:25 pm
glimmer BRONZE, Corvallis, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
My favorite quote is one by Albert Einstein-
"Learn from yesterday, Live for today, Hope for tomorrow."

Absolutely loved it!

Duckie430 said...
on Sep. 20 2011 at 8:30 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

very emotional; good work!

on Sep. 20 2011 at 12:57 am
Bookworm_Belle GOLD, Litchfield Park, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
You will never know whats on the next lily pad unless you leap

Dang......That there is deep......good job

on Sep. 4 2011 at 1:05 am
Jessie-Mo SILVER, Mo. City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Mama always said life was like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get."

This is a very smashing poem, mate. Continue on with your work, I love it. If you don't mind a bit, check out some of my own work. They're all poems, you might like them. They could use some stars, you know?

on Aug. 7 2011 at 4:09 pm
EnigmaticBeing PLATINUM, Santa Barbara, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Be careful what you set your heart upon - for it will surely be yours.'
James A. Baldwin

It sounds like your dad and my mom know eachother...




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