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Calm, cool & collected
I seem
Yet suddenly
Please, please
Just see
This really isn't me
My thoughts are racing
My blood is mistakening
Calm, cool & collected is no longer
Pacing
But chasing
My demons around
Lost but frantically found
But without a sound
Just a leap & a bound
I'm not going down
In the ground
Not here
Not now
Soft & fragile
Broken smile
No upside down frown
Chaos & hell
My optimism is no longer around
Not even aroused
Fighting my demons
Is task been frowned
I'm just so down & done with
Calm, cool & collected





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RoyII said...
Apr. 9, 2014 at 6:36 pm
i love it  it was awsome.
 
Decipher replied...
Apr. 10, 2014 at 2:55 pm
Thanks man!
 
Nintendude said...
Apr. 9, 2014 at 4:45 pm
Nice! U did a very good job
 
Decipher replied...
Apr. 9, 2014 at 5:28 pm
Thank you.
 
SceneGirl said...
Apr. 8, 2014 at 8:04 pm
I like it, to me it sounds like your either A.) rapping, or B.) paniced. If that's what you were aiming for, good job. Other than that. It's good.
 
Decipher replied...
Apr. 8, 2014 at 8:05 pm
Basically, fast paced feel. Thank you.
 
LitLover101 said...
Apr. 8, 2014 at 7:53 pm
Wow, This poem personally speaks to me and i think a lot of teens out there with anxiety disorder or depression. This poem had a big impact
 
Decipher replied...
Apr. 8, 2014 at 7:55 pm
I'm really glad to hear that and that you know what it was actually about, thankyou.
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 8, 2014 at 7:49 pm
Nicely written! Love the flow and the words! I love the lines "Please please Just see This isnt really me" Amazing!
 
Decipher replied...
Apr. 8, 2014 at 7:50 pm
Thank you, so much! I really appreciate it!
 
AhtmahKhalsa said...
Apr. 8, 2014 at 7:48 pm
Pretty good stuff here...well done.
 
Decipher replied...
Apr. 8, 2014 at 7:49 pm
Thank you! Very Much!
 
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