Unravel Me

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unravel me
my hopes
and dreams
my insecurities
what brings me clarity
what causes my
insanity.





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Zolenz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 18, 2014 at 6:01 pm
thankyou!  
 
elycavill This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 16, 2014 at 3:52 pm
I am not sure if my comment is going to be published because I used word d*mn, so again, so d*amn good poem! loved it and keep up :)
 
elycavill This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 16, 2014 at 3:51 pm
Short and full of deep thinking, so (damn') good. I really love this poem, and the rhyme in the end is like sugar in the end! keep up writing for sure!
 
moderndayEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2014 at 11:08 am
If poeple realy do care about you, then they're willing to unravel you and be with you. Short as it may be, it's powerful! ^_^ thank you, for sharing this!
 
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