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March 15, 2014
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She was the ocean
And he was the shoreline
A thousand times she will run to him
But a million times he will send her away





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Nicolette4455 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 23, 2014 at 8:52 pm
Beautiful metaphor! 
 
Rachel R. replied...
Mar. 25, 2014 at 8:54 pm
Thank you!
 
AzureBlue said...
Mar. 23, 2014 at 12:04 pm
A splendid metaphor well penned, I am simply inspired. *_*
 
Rachel R. replied...
Mar. 25, 2014 at 8:56 pm
Thank you so much!
 
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