??What does it take??

March 10, 2014
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran


??What does it take to make someone love you??
??A hug??
??A kiss??

??What does it take to escape from this world??
??A blade??
??Or a friend??


??What does it take to make a friend??
??A smile??
A word??

??What does it take to love??
??A heart??
??Or a soul??


The author's comments:
Feeling alone.

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on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:53 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Thanks... 

on Sep. 21 2014 at 11:30 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

on Sep. 21 2014 at 1:16 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I can connect to this, a lot. I love it. Never give up; you do matter, and you do have a talent and greatness in you, because you do. Thank you so much, for sharing this. 

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on Apr. 14 2014 at 8:10 pm
TheUniverse, Everywhere,, Other
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Exercise to stimulate, not to annihilate. The world wasn't formed in a day, and neither were we. Set small goals and build upon them.

Very well written...  It has a respective form and I like how it is easily relatable to a lot of people including myself....  Keep up the great writing!!!!

on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:04 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

You are a really sweet girl

on Mar. 20 2014 at 7:59 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Wow!! I can relate to this poem, to an extent! I really love this one! Thanks for writing it!


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