??What does it take??

??What does it take to make someone love you??
??A hug??
??A kiss??

??What does it take to escape from this world??
??A blade??
??Or a friend??


??What does it take to make a friend??
??A smile??
A word??

??What does it take to love??
??A heart??
??Or a soul??





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MissEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 21, 2014 at 1:16 pm
I can connect to this, a lot. I love it. Never give up; you do matter, and you do have a talent and greatness in you, because you do. Thank you so much, for sharing this. 
 
ImmortalRose replied...
Sept. 21, 2014 at 11:30 pm
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
 
TheUniverse said...
Apr. 14, 2014 at 8:10 pm
Very well written...  It has a respective form and I like how it is easily relatable to a lot of people including myself....  Keep up the great writing!!!!
 
ImmortalRose replied...
Nov. 11, 2014 at 1:53 pm
Thanks... 
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 20, 2014 at 7:59 pm
Wow!! I can relate to this poem, to an extent! I really love this one! Thanks for writing it!
 
Rosalynne replied...
Mar. 20, 2014 at 8:04 pm
You are a really sweet girl
 
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