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Little Dream World This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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I walk
In my field of colored paper flowers
Watching the petals
Slowly fall off
And flutter through
The rainbow colored wind
As the white rain
Begins to drip down
From candy flavored clouds
To soak the multicolored flying petals
Of the paper flowers
And bring them to rest
In the dying black grass.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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lonelyLaviathin said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 11:24 am:
you should make it go deeper and instead of repeating flowers you should choose different imagery to help show the innocence being lost to the blackened earth. is it charred from a storm? how about scorged from a flame?
 
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chrischris said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 5:22 pm:
hmm. this is rather eerily reminiscent of an evanescence song called "imaginary."
 
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ariwrites94 said...
Aug. 17, 2009 at 3:31 pm:
Interesting.
 
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annkaykay2011 said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 11:07 pm:
The flow was great,
amazing imagery,
kinda dark
 
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sweetlytorn11 said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 9:06 pm:
i love the discription of everything (:
 
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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2009 at 6:02 pm:
Awww. This is so beautiful. It creates colorful images and I love it! Great job!
 
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