I Broke the Sky MAG

March 7, 2014
By ZoeBro17 PLATINUM, Carlsbad, California
ZoeBro17 PLATINUM, Carlsbad, California
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Favorite Quote:
Make the most of yourself, for thats all their is of you.




- Ralph Waldo Emerson


Se me rompio el cielo.
I broke the sky,
or rather,
the sky broke on me.
As everything always does.
Crumbling, cracking, shattering.
Loudly, boldly, and daringly
breaking.
I look up at the ceiling,
and I can see the azure pieces,
crashing onto the floor.
Even pushing through.
And then I realize,
in my dreams,
se me rompio el cielo.
I broke the sky.



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on Mar. 16 2014 at 10:08 pm
Laydi_Makaveli, Great Mills, Maryland
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"No One Has The Power To Make You Feel Inferior Without Your Consent"- First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt

Youre so welcome lol you deserve it.

on Mar. 14 2014 at 8:44 pm
ZoeBro17 PLATINUM, Carlsbad, California
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Favorite Quote:
Make the most of yourself, for thats all their is of you.




- Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thank you NasyaChai! That is so kind and you have no idea how much it means to me that you understand what I'm saying in my poetry.

on Mar. 13 2014 at 10:05 pm
Laydi_Makaveli, Great Mills, Maryland
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"No One Has The Power To Make You Feel Inferior Without Your Consent"- First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt

Im not quite sure what it is but youre writing gives off a wonderful aura, especially in this poem, that is so open even though this piece is so vague. This is...pure creation.


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