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Gritty Pity

February 27, 2014
By SerenityDemon GOLD, New York, New York
SerenityDemon GOLD, New York, New York
10 articles 5 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Death before dishonor~ Someone Cool


Designer aspirations,

mock my desperation

mock my trepidation

Yet, I will be the one in the papers, for infecting the nation...



Conquering your hypocrisy with undermining philosophy,

let us hear the voice of democracy

mortified with animosity



trickery, suicidal tendencies, agencies, and infidelity

petty fees, passive aggressive genes, and power hungry policies.


The author's comments:
Something I had in my head.

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on Mar. 11 2014 at 6:00 pm
SerenityDemon GOLD, New York, New York
10 articles 5 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Death before dishonor~ Someone Cool

Thanks so much! It's so nice to get good feedback! 

on Mar. 6 2014 at 10:52 am
tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
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smile through everything no matter how bad it gets because it could be worse and if it gets worse well then it can only get better. :)

I really loved this poem. As the reader you can really tell how heartfelt this is and the poem really comes alive through the rhythm and rhymes that you use. Well done! :]