Ovals and Other Besmirched Things MAG

February 26, 2014
By j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention."


Thirty-three sunflowers danced with an
elephant in the dusks of Africa with
amazing gusts of wind and the fascination of: a triangle.

Hello my colorful, wonderful friends, I am light blue king of the trends, I am in the sky, hair dye, and fruit fly.
Although I can be excessively, utterly,
crazily, shy.

Behold, amazing is the oval
Not angular but mellow, an evolved circle.
A questionable gift like a snowflake
or rubble
An underrated shape like a line or a circle
An underused talent like a door or some purple
Or a misunderstood personality, like myself or a person in trouble.

I am a hyena, laughing at my predators, howling at my prey,
I stalk the streets and
YELL
what I say.


The author's comments:
This poem is explaining components that make me the person that I am. So read carefully and analyze well.

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j_smith SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2014 at 1:01 pm
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention."

Thanks for the compliment!

on Mar. 4 2014 at 9:11 pm
HannaHarris GOLD, Houston, Texas
11 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've got 40 ridiculous ideas every single second and I intend to express them all." -Ezra Miller

I like this poem a lot. I really enjoyed the geometric bit being woven into a larger picture.

j_smith SILVER said...
on Mar. 4 2014 at 2:43 pm
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention."

Thanks so much!

on Mar. 3 2014 at 6:45 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

I loive it... You certainly do deserve the award

on Mar. 3 2014 at 6:41 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

Fantastic! It is unlike any poem I have ever read. I love the metaphors and how seamlessly you incorporated imagery and sensory details. 5/5!!!!!

j_smith SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 6:29 pm
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention."

Thanks! That means alot!

on Mar. 3 2014 at 5:42 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

This is such a unique and brilliantly written piece of poetry! I loved it. 5/5 stars

on Mar. 3 2014 at 3:43 pm
Shadow_Wolf GOLD, Mayfield Heigts, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is not opening your eyes but opening your heart."
"You see not with your eyes, But with your heart."
"Think first with your heart not your head."
"If it has a heart, It is human."

I love this poem, very strong and powerful.... GOOD JOB!

j_smith SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 3:16 pm
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention."

Great Poem! You really have talent!


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