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Ovals and Other Besmirched Things This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Thirty-three sunflowers danced with an
elephant in the dusks of Africa with
amazing gusts of wind and the fascination of: a triangle.

Hello my colorful, wonderful friends, I am light blue king of the trends, I am in the sky, hair dye, and fruit fly.
Although I can be excessively, utterly,
crazily, shy.

Behold, amazing is the oval
Not angular but mellow, an evolved circle.
A questionable gift like a snowflake
or rubble
An underrated shape like a line or a circle
An underused talent like a door or some purple
Or a misunderstood personality, like myself or a person in trouble.

I am a hyena, laughing at my predators, howling at my prey,
I stalk the streets and
YELL
what I say.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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HannaHarrisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 9:11 pm:
I like this poem a lot. I really enjoyed the geometric bit being woven into a larger picture.
 
jtsmith3 replied...
today at 1:01 pm :
Thanks for the compliment!
 
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RosalynneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3 at 6:45 pm:
I loive it... You certainly do deserve the award
 
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411EllieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 3 at 6:41 pm:
Fantastic! It is unlike any poem I have ever read. I love the metaphors and how seamlessly you incorporated imagery and sensory details. 5/5!!!!!
 
jtsmith3 replied...
yesterday at 2:43 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
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WinterRose1976This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3 at 5:42 pm:
This is such a unique and brilliantly written piece of poetry! I loved it. 5/5 stars
 
jtsmith3 replied...
Mar. 3 at 6:29 pm :
Thanks! That means alot!
 
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Shadow_Wolf said...
Mar. 3 at 3:43 pm:
I love this poem, very strong and powerful.... GOOD JOB!
 
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jtsmith3 said...
Mar. 3 at 3:16 pm:
Great Poem! You really have talent!
 
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