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Hurricane

When you enter the room,
my breath catches in my throat.
The light reflects off of your brown hair.
Your eyes sparkle with delight,
our eyes meet in an instant.
It's been two weeks since our last big fight.
But I just can't keep you off my mind.
I know you think of me too, even when your looking at her.
Cause we might be miles apart but in my heart your just a step away.
You're pulling me back into your beautiful horror film.
Theres a fire when we speak,
a spark when we kiss,
a hurricane at night.
So I guess what I'm trying to say is I still love you, always.



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_Zavery_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 21 at 11:56 am:
The line "We might be miles apart but in my heart youre just a step away" is very touching. Nice work! Youre a brilliant writer 
 
Real_life_LoveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 23 at 8:23 am :
Thank you!  
 
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reallifelovelaugh said...
Mar. 13 at 9:48 am:
this is a awesome poem one of my favs and u r one of the best authors out here! love u always ur besstie!
 
Real_life_LoveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 14 at 8:06 am :
Awwwe thanks babygirl! I love you too.
 
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