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January 29, 2014
By meowitselizabeth PLATINUM, Fletcher, North Carolina
meowitselizabeth PLATINUM, Fletcher, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Don't be delicate; be vast and brilliant.


if the words that fell from our mouths
emitted by our vocal chords
spoken to friends or enemies
appeared in ink upon skin, how careful would you be?

would you throw words around carelessly or would you fill silence with spoken
thoughts
feelings
actions
?

how much would you love to see a declaration of love,
a display of beauty or kindness
an opinion
written on your skin in ink, having just as much a lasting
impression on you as it does
on the person you were speaking to, and even more, what if that person was
yourself?
would you speak kindly to yourself, giving the reminder that you are loved, would you be more careful about worrying out loud over things that cannot be changed?

if the words that fell from your mouth,
emitted by your vocal chords,
spoken to friends or enemies,
appeared in ink on your skin, how much more careful would you be?
I don't know about everyone else, but
I think
I would speak in poetry.


The author's comments:
I was having a conversation with a friend about this topic, and we were imagining a world where everything you said was automatically tattooed onto your skin for you to remember forever. I still am kept up at night by this thought, but I think it's best put into words. Enjoy :)

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on Mar. 22 2014 at 8:33 pm
meowitselizabeth PLATINUM, Fletcher, North Carolina
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be delicate; be vast and brilliant.

Thanks so much, that made me smile!

on Mar. 22 2014 at 11:15 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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Wow! I am in love with this poem <3 *round of applause* You are an ingenious poet! Never stop writing! With love, Lexy

on Mar. 22 2014 at 10:34 am
meowitselizabeth PLATINUM, Fletcher, North Carolina
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be delicate; be vast and brilliant.

Thanks! I appreciate it; I wasn't very confident in this piece when I sent it in, but I'm glad you liked it.

on Mar. 21 2014 at 11:45 pm
DeanMoriarty SILVER, Newark, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
“Letting it get to you. You know what that’s called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now is all that counts.”
— The Doctor

Very good piece and an especially great last line,  a very powerful ending. 

on Mar. 21 2014 at 8:21 pm
meowitselizabeth PLATINUM, Fletcher, North Carolina
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be delicate; be vast and brilliant.

Thank you so much!

on Mar. 21 2014 at 9:52 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Wow! This is beautiful! Love the topic and form! Flows nicely! Great job!