Unabiding Love

January 31, 2014
By Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean


Lately, I've been getting stabs of emotion.
I don't see it coming, it just happens.
All the changes I've undergone
For quite a while have all been a
Result of her. I love her with
Everything I possess, but I can't have
Her. My heart has opened up
And learned to truly love every other
Girl around me. What I want is
Someone who will stay with me
And loves touching and being on
Other people, because that's the
Type of person I am. I'm open to
Anybody around me, but I want her
More than all others combined and
Multiplied by 10,000. I don't know
What to do. I don't want to
Constantly switch girls. I want one
Steady one. But I just don't know.
Be calm, my tumultuous heart.


The author's comments:
This is all about my love for my soul mate, in case you hadn't guessed. We can't be together, much as I so wish we could, and it kills me to know that.

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on Feb. 27 2014 at 9:48 am
Rose_13 PLATINUM, Farmington, New Mexico
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If you try and teach a fish to climb a tree, it will live it's life forever thinking that it is dumb. ~Albert Einstein

You're welcome! Thank you for the compliment too!

on Feb. 26 2014 at 9:37 pm
Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean

Bah, I know a good writer when I see one. The greatest critic is yourself, after all. I know you write well, even if you don't think so, but I'm not one to pass up a compliment, unless it isn't true. Thank you for that.

on Feb. 26 2014 at 9:49 am
Rose_13 PLATINUM, Farmington, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
If you try and teach a fish to climb a tree, it will live it's life forever thinking that it is dumb. ~Albert Einstein

Yeah, thanks. I don't think I'm very good. I just go here to write when I'm in the mood. But you're really good!

on Feb. 25 2014 at 6:16 pm
Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean

Thank you. I've also read a lot of your articles, and you also have a talent for writing. I believe I commented on some of them, but I don't remember exactly.

on Feb. 25 2014 at 9:46 am
Rose_13 PLATINUM, Farmington, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
If you try and teach a fish to climb a tree, it will live it's life forever thinking that it is dumb. ~Albert Einstein

I totally understand. There's a guy like that at my school. He's great, but he hates me, no joke. I'm sorry that the girl doesn't like you back. Maybe one day she will. But, I've been reading your articles and they're all really great! You're a very talented writer.

on Feb. 24 2014 at 11:04 pm
Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean

Thank you! Unfortunately, even though I see her as my soul mate, she doesn't see me the same way. We've been apart for five months now, going on six, and I still feel the same as I did all those months before, if not much more strongly. My heart and emotions are extremely at sixes and sevens, and it makes me slaphappy as well. It's a blessing at times because people flock to me, mostly being girls, but at other times it's such a curse, and I just wish I didn't feel this way.

on Feb. 24 2014 at 10:36 am
Rose_13 PLATINUM, Farmington, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
If you try and teach a fish to climb a tree, it will live it's life forever thinking that it is dumb. ~Albert Einstein

This is so sad but so incredible!


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