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Setting Sun

January 27, 2014
By Jflood77 SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
Jflood77 SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"If you want to be happy, be." ~Leo Tolstoy


The clouds move in as the sun retreats
And she will fall into the deepest sleep
Drifting from the world around her
Leaving me to stand on my own two feet
The thought of this is scaring me
I'm fading from reality
Cause your not standing next to me
How could this be happening
Beauty fades in the eyes of this finality
Leaving me wasn't hard for you
But why when we've come so far,
It just seemed to fall apart
Now I'm searching for you in the dark
I'm left with a Life of little breath
Please come back, your scaring me to death
Ohh I'll drink this all away
I'll swallow all the pain
Cause this love was all in vain.
Ohh I'm so ashamed



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on Feb. 9 2014 at 8:52 pm
Jflood77 SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want to be happy, be." ~Leo Tolstoy

its been a busy weekend. ill read them now :)

on Feb. 9 2014 at 7:44 am
Bethany_Saint GOLD, Dexter, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Never regret something that once made you smile." - Amber Deckers

"Stories are more than just images. As you continue in the tale, you get to know the characters, motivations and conflicts that make up the core of the story...." - Livia Blackburne

I thought this was a beautiful poem... I LOVE it! And I thought you shold know I took your advice and posted some more...