Bad Seed

January 14, 2014
By dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"


There is no such thing as
a bad seed,
there is only such thing as
a crooked flower.
For we all start off
as something good,
but it is those who are
poorly water and
hidden in the shade that
grow up a bit wilted.



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dinks PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 24 2014 at 4:31 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Thanks!  :)

on Apr. 24 2014 at 8:39 am
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

The concept of this poem is brilliant. Very creative!

dinks PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 22 2014 at 6:11 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Thank you :)

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Apr. 21 2014 at 8:07 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

I believe this poem is very true and full of meaning. We start off good, but some of us take the wrong path and end up growing a bit crooked in the shade. But we always have to remember to reach for the sun. I love reading your work :)

dinks PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2014 at 10:30 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Good points, thanks!

dinks PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2014 at 10:29 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Thank you!

on Feb. 3 2014 at 7:24 am
RoyalCorona SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 290 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of us fave failed to match our dream of perfection. I rate us on the basis of our splendid failure to do the impossible. -William Faulkner

I don't necessarily agree with the message but I like the idea! The poem is marvelous, even better than crumbs! Good job!

on Feb. 2 2014 at 7:06 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
9 articles 3 photos 167 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

The rhythm and structure of this is good, as well as the puncuation. Although I'm not sure I agree with the whole idea, I see where your coming from and the way you write it is beautiful.


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