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January 6, 2014
By amk7997 BRONZE, Congers, New York
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amk7997 BRONZE, Congers, New York
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A dark place
Never ending
Torture
Begging for it to
Stop
Nothing but
Tears
No one speaks
Silent
But thoughts are enough to
Kill
You cry
Silence
No one is there

© Samantha W., Albany, NY

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I was feeling deep and revisiting the past.
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amk7997 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2014 at 7:36 pm
amk7997 BRONZE, Congers, New York
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thank you !! I know that I need to add more imagery but I appreciate that you liked the simplicity :)
elycavill SILVER said...
on Feb. 1 2014 at 3:59 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
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As reading this had an association on Pablo( Diego José Francisco de Paula Juan Nepomuceno María de los Remedios Cipriano de la Santísima Trinidad Ruiz y ) Picasso haha. I like the simple method of enumeration u used. It made it clear and easy to read but still all the words remained standing strong. Nice :)
Myvoice4change SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2014 at 4:45 pm
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Aw, this is a sad poem and I'm sorry you had to go through this, but I like the way it was written, and that you used nouns like "torture, "tears," "silent," to emphasize the poems point. I might suggest some more imagery and descriptiveness, but good job!