but yet I'm still here

November 18, 2013
she feels alone
but yet I stand right here

she says no one cares
but yet I stick around

she wants to die because no one will miss her
but yet she is the first thing on my mind

here I am you fool open your eyes
but she lays there because she was blind to me

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samiasaskia24 said...
Dec. 7, 2013 at 6:44 am
Wise words!
Dr.FeelGood replied...
Dec. 9, 2013 at 11:46 am
thanks  but its not wise at all its just painful
samiasaskia24 replied...
Dec. 9, 2013 at 9:28 pm
In wise I meant relatable, and the description of your poem holds information I think should be spread to more people.
Dr.FeelGood replied...
Dec. 10, 2013 at 11:49 am
well thanks :) oh and i like your stuff
samiasaskia24 replied...
Dec. 10, 2013 at 10:11 pm
Thank you! I'm going to post some new things soon! I haven't been on teen ink for ages, and all the writing is over a year old now! i really like your work too! :)
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