November 16, 2013
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I run
my feet beating
on the ground

the wind
is piercing
the tears

shortness of breath
I run on

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EmmaClaire0823 said...
Dec. 10, 2013 at 6:39 pm
I really liked how your poem flowed. It was smooth and elequent and wasn't choppy at all. 
Ballerinagirl1016 said...
Nov. 21, 2013 at 7:50 pm
Love the Poem, I run allot as well and it really does help me deal with stress. The poem was well done and I could tell you spent time contemplating and chosing each word. Please rate my work!
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