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I fall.
I write.
I rise.
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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27 at 8:11 pm:
This is great! It's so simple, but so true! :) I also love the movement of falling and rising: beautiful!
 
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Janelle7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 25 at 10:43 am:
This is amazing! So true! So relatable! just wow!!! 
 
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SaphiraBrightscales said...
Mar. 22 at 2:06 pm:
I got one interjection for ya: wow!!
 
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MetalHead36 said...
Jan. 5 at 8:33 pm:
I love this. It's simple. 6 words, delivers such a powerful message, this is one of the finest poems I've read. Well done.
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 6 at 10:34 am :
Thank you so much!
 
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411Ellie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2013 at 8:00 pm:
The cycle of a poet summed up in 6 words. Beauty in its simplicity :)
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 17, 2013 at 8:04 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
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HornyUnicorn69 said...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 9:09 am:
True. Simplicity in its most complex and meanigful form. Great job
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 10:51 am :
Thanks a LOT unicorn!
 
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RozaAlexander said...
Nov. 15, 2013 at 8:29 pm:
simplicity and complexity in one poem, beautiful genius
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 6:20 am :
That was the exact thing in my mind when I wrote this piece! You have no idea how happy you just made me :)
 
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PoeticStranger said...
Nov. 14, 2013 at 8:41 am:
Ray, this is a fantastic piece. I have read this poem before by you, but for some reason, never commented on it. I absolutely love this!
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 14, 2013 at 6:51 pm :
Thanks! Hearing that means a lot! :)
 
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EvilAngel said...
Nov. 10, 2013 at 9:02 pm:
I dig it  
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 10, 2013 at 9:35 pm :
Thanks a lot :)
 
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KaylaaLovee said...
Nov. 6, 2013 at 1:46 pm:
Simple=Perfection <33
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 8, 2013 at 5:17 am :
Thanks!! Glad you too are a fan of simplicity :D
 
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FlyingKite said...
Nov. 5, 2013 at 9:01 am:
It's deep, but you schould elaborate more on what it means, and what you are trying to say! Good work!
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 8, 2013 at 5:13 am :
Thanks!! It feels really nice to get actually genuine comments :)  I'll surely will take care of it the next time I write, thanks!
 
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KasieDee said...
Nov. 5, 2013 at 8:56 am:
These six words are powerful to any writer. I mean, anyone who is drowning would reach for the tree limb. 
 
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