Genetics MAG

October 16, 2008
By Alexandra Bishop SILVER, Oak Ridge, Tennessee
Alexandra Bishop SILVER, Oak Ridge, Tennessee
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People tell me I have his nose
Because it’s strong and hooked
With a powerful bump at the top
But I hope that’s all he gave me
An ugly nose is enough
And better than an ugly mind that
Sinks its teeth into anything it can
Like the hearts of girls who have
Not yet learned to love the real way
I hope I do not have his hands
Calloused from the cold metal of a gun
And stained with a twisted love
Love I hope I do not have
Because love is not a fist or a knife
Love is not an apology
I hope I do not have his back
Because he never had mine
And I hope a nose does not give me
A guiltless conscience and a
Forgetful brain.



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on Aug. 31 2011 at 1:33 pm
TyroneJohnson, Carrollton, Texas
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This is a really emotional poem you have here. I really liked how you described everything. It really painted an image in my head. I hope you make more poems like this in the future.

Zap7861 said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 10:43 am
Zap7861, Carrollton, Texas
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This poem includes true emotion. I really liked the details it included over their feelings. The full expression of themselves and the people around them truly described their view of their surroundings.

on Aug. 30 2011 at 10:44 pm
RiverSong BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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Wow, this is really good.  I especially like the last five lines, they're really creative and I can totally identify with them.  Good job :)

on Aug. 30 2011 at 4:57 pm
LittleMissSunshine08_11 SILVER, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Those who can laugh without cause have either found the true meaning of happiness or have gone stark raving mad. ~Norm Papernick

The line, "love is not an apology" seems like an uncommon saying to me, and it really rang true. I also love the nose metaphor... amazing job!

on Aug. 30 2011 at 11:50 am
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

Omg this is incresdible ! Your ways with words made this poem. It's so powerrful. "I hope I do not have his back, because he never had mine." The last few lines were my favorite. Keep up the amaaaazing work:D

on Jul. 17 2011 at 11:19 pm
dancer11srubin GOLD, Long Grove, Illinois
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omg wow, this almost made me cry. And im going to check out ur other poems because wow

on Jul. 17 2011 at 3:47 pm
HollyBell BRONZE, Orpington, Kent, Other
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This is brilliant. It really spoke out to me with real emotion. I really like the part 'I hope I do not have his back because he never had mine'

There is another famous poem called 'Genetics' you should check it out:

http://ireland.poetryinternationalweb.org/piw_cms/cms/cms_module/index.php?obj_id=7676

although it is not much like yours there are some similarities. Anyway, great job.


on Jul. 17 2011 at 1:33 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Really good, check out my work?

MariaP. GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 10:08 pm
MariaP. GOLD, Ham Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
“There are only two ways to live your life. One is as though nothing is a miracle. The other is as though everything is a miracle.” – Albert Einstein

Holy cow this is amazing. Check out my work if you have a chance! You're so expressive, I feel like I can see into your heart with this poem. Amazing job hun.

tmacy95 said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 4:59 pm

this poem made me smile and I could really relate to every word!

Nice Job!!


on Jun. 22 2011 at 9:18 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

i love this poem and how you tied the body parts into different ways of love or characteristics of a person. i absolutely love it:)

RyanAD GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:02 pm
RyanAD GOLD, Grandville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Any one who ever gave his best, never regretted it."

very well written. i enjoyed reading it

on Jun. 3 2011 at 3:21 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

awesome sauce!!!1

soccer28 GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 2:46 pm
soccer28 GOLD, Setauket, New York
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teenink*....sorry

 


soccer28 GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 2:46 pm
soccer28 GOLD, Setauket, New York
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i have one word: wow. This is the best poem i have read yet on teening, i love when you talk about his back

 


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 10:17 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

This poem reminds me of Daddy's womb by Carl H. 

Very good poem. :)


on May. 12 2011 at 7:35 pm
Mortie PLATINUM, Oak Run, California
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Favorite Quote:
Whats The Point?

i think all of what anybody could ever say abou thow good this poem is is already posted. so, im just gunna agree with them. GoodJob

=)


on May. 12 2011 at 5:21 pm
my.freedom.lies.in.free.verse PLATINUM, Tosa, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm in love with you, and I know that love is just a shout into a void, and that oblivion is inevitable... and I know the sun will swallow the only earth we'll ever have, and I am in love with you." Augustus Waters

omg!!!!!!!!!!! soooooooo good!

on May. 12 2011 at 2:52 pm
kaykay101 PLATINUM, Arundel, Maine
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nothing less than amazing!! great job!!!:):):)

on May. 2 2011 at 4:08 pm
kateknopp BRONZE, Carmel, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Trade your guns and fire with doves; we fight for love, and peace will find us with harmony." -Christofer Drew

"Sometimes you've gotta fall before you fly."

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." -Oscar Wilde

this is just beautiful. please write more :)


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