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Star Fish

I think this would feel
Like a bunch of little kisses.
Or immensely mind numbing pain,
As your soul is sucked out through Satan’s evil black starfish minions.

Aren’t you a ray of sunshine today?



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chezbonaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sep. 20 at 4:36 pm:
I'm with shade
 
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KaylaaLovee said...
Nov. 6, 2013 at 12:19 pm:
I love this! the last line is amazing!
 
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Shade3043This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 5, 2013 at 2:20 am:
It's kinda short, and kinda odd..... I feel like I'm missing something here, but I'm gonna give it a 4/5....
 
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Zombiehuntress said...
Oct. 29, 2013 at 3:48 pm:
Wow! I really like this! It has a twist in it and I very much enjoyed reading it. 
 
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Elisa99 said...
Oct. 29, 2013 at 1:27 pm:
Very well done, short but strong, an ability I have always admired in people. 5 starss!!
 
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