Cut Me Down

October 7, 2013
Cut me down, Free my soul, whats with this town, why so cold, everyone here is oh so bold, my life is ending, their souls now sold, now they see they`ll see the end thst I had foretold, I know not the way, but yes it shall be a deadly display, destruction and disarray, the day the bullied fight back, that`ll be the day.

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411Ellie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 9:20 pm
This poem is so powerful. It strikes a cord in the hearts of bully victims like myself. Please make it into a song! Keep on writing! ~Ellie
Saintz-Flam3Rose replied...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 8:26 am
;) I love this also
sadesdd said...
Oct. 9, 2013 at 11:58 am
I hope the day comes:) I like the futuristic view in your writing and the inspiration it carries with it!
Saintz-Flam3Rose replied...
Oct. 11, 2013 at 9:09 am
Thanks and I cant wait either.
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