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Waking Up With the Sun

September 27, 2013
By NicoleJolene GOLD, Napa, California
NicoleJolene GOLD, Napa, California
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the sun is rising
enterprising
outshining the embers
of slowly dying hope

the sun is rising
anesthetizing
the negative thoughts in my head

bright shining rays!
my spirits do rise
i will not backdown
i will not compromise

and positive thoughts
manifest like the sun
life is not a game
it cannot be won

and take a deep breath
stress is toxic--you're dead
and hope does not reason
so hold up your head

the sun is rising
enterprising
it salutes you for trying again



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on Sep. 30 2013 at 7:29 pm
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM, Hayward, California
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This is sooooo good! I loved it. Well done. I felt every word of this poem...