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smoking is a form of suicide
similar to jumping out of a plane
in slow motion
without a parachute

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 30, 2013 at 4:28 pm
Very visible simile. Cool. This poem is like a PSA but more lyrical. Congrats on the Editors' Choice. 
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