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Life's loop.

September 18, 2013
By animefreakeatcher GOLD, Garner, North Carolina
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"If you judge a fish by its ablity to climb a tree it will live its whole life beliving it is dumb"

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A life starts off in darkness
Darkness starts off anywhere
Anywhere life my go
Go to where the darkness holds

Wondering about life
Life is true or not
Not to ponder the mystery
Mystery of death that is.

One can only wonder
Wonder what it might hold
Hold the darkness that’s kept
Kept you from being free

Even though we believe we are
Are we truly this free?
Free from the darkness that
That we were born from.

The answers is yet to be given
Given like the light of life
Life may be taken from us
Us given to the darkness of death.

© Tatyana Z., Norwood, MA

The author's comments:
This is my first time trying to write a loop poem. so it might not make that much sense.
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