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Longing to Feel Again

September 10, 2013
By Lil-Bear BRONZE, Livingston, Montana
Lil-Bear BRONZE, Livingston, Montana
3 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one can save you but yourself, and you're worth saving. Its a war not easily won but if anything is worth winning then this is it" --Unknown


i just wanna feel love again.
im thinking this could be the end of me,
who is this person in the mirror i see?
i just wanna feel love again
the truth inside me is feeding me a lie,
my soul is weak, and sucked dry.
from this, who have i become?
so cold and heartless, like a black abyss tightening its grip on me,
i cant escape.
i used to be strong but lately ive been drowning myself every night in my own despair,
i can no longer breathe..
the dark room is becoming dim with light.
can this be it?
where is my self control?
this is the end of me, so look closely and you will see the girl i used to be is no longer me.
i just wanna feel love again,
but you always win.


The author's comments:
When I write, I write how I feel.
What inspired me to write this is how my relationship has been going, not very good by the sounds of this poem, obviously. I'm not wanting sympathy but I do want feed back on how it is. I'm trying to become a better writer and the only way I can do that is for others to critique my work.

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