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Fighting

September 6, 2013
By LucyK PLATINUM, Greenwich, Connecticut
LucyK PLATINUM, Greenwich, Connecticut
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he is a poem with feet
and I'm fighting to be
the tiniest sliver of
a dot of an i



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 6:44 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

The simplicity of the metaphor makes this poem perfect. Congrats on the Editors' Choice. (I see you have many of them. You must be talented.) This poem definitely shows it.