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August 16, 2013
By wendelina SILVER, Ponte Vedra Beach, Florida
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wendelina SILVER, Ponte Vedra Beach, Florida
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Never let your fear decide your fate. - AWOLNATION

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I try to sympathize,
I try to cooperate,
I try to befriend,
I try to comfort,
I try to assist,
I try to amend,
I try to help,
I try to fix,
I try to
I try
But I need you to try too

© Tatyana Z., Norwood, MA

The author's comments:
In this piece I was trying to reflect a struggle I was having trying to help people who wouldn't help themselves and wouldn't appreciate what I was trying to do. The shortening amount of letters in each line show how my willpower was giving out.
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FiddleBunny BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2013 at 7:23 pm
FiddleBunny BRONZE, New Providence, New Jersey
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Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass... It's about learning to dance in the rain.

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I like the way you did the format. Even if others don't move a muscle, you will learn something from the experience. I've been though what you're talking about.