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Summer ‘11

August 7, 2013
By ss.Heart SILVER, San Jose, California
ss.Heart SILVER, San Jose, California
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
You try you fail,you try you fail, but the only true failure is when you stop trying.


There is a path that bends and curves across the Cali Coast
Only once have I been here but yet i love it the most!
The golden drops of honey glinting through the pine
This place is very special I’d love to call it mine!
And as the path falls and rises
Its takes you to its peak
and once you’re there i promise you
the view is magnifique!
Shimmering is the vast blue ocean
cold winds rip through my hair
the feeling is personifying
how i wish you were there
The road is called Big Sur
it runs down highway one
and once you get by the beach
good memories have just begun
Gleaming is ocean too bright to stare for long
Beautiful are the moments baby otters hug their moms
Then i dig my toes in deeper in the sand
the icy water rushes as the sand feels cold and wet
I crinckle my toes out as i jump along the shoreline
how i wish this place was all mine
Some summers never forgotten some places never lost,
The summer of ‘11 has a special place in my heart
and to this day I hear the wind calling out to me
the breeze the sand,Bixby Bridge,and the gorgeous sea...



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on Aug. 31 2013 at 3:41 pm
ss.Heart SILVER, San Jose, California
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
You try you fail,you try you fail, but the only true failure is when you stop trying.

Alison, Yes!!!!!!! it 's a must see place in my books ;)

on Aug. 31 2013 at 3:40 pm
ss.Heart SILVER, San Jose, California
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
You try you fail,you try you fail, but the only true failure is when you stop trying.

Thanks Jade! Yes i love this place and I do feel complete and sound near it.Thanks for your input <3

on Aug. 29 2013 at 11:06 pm
WallFlowerAlice GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why wait when you only live once? Go out there dance, smile, and enjoy yourself! If your not having fun then darling your doing something wrong!"
- Therese

Like I need a plane ticket to that place, I'm like hot and bored right now.

on Aug. 27 2013 at 9:21 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I really liked the sentimental feel to this, and it's catchy like a song because the rhyme scheme is so playful. Good rhythm, this was really pretty :)