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Tick, tock, tick, clock, the sound
Time, He has come
He has power - you will see
Forwards, backwards
Eternity is His power
Power? His is eternity
Backwards, forwards
See will you - power has He
Come has He? Time?
Sound the clock - tick, tock,
Tick...




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DragonRiddler said...
today at 6:51 pm:
Time personified! I love this :)
 
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Kimberly B. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 14 at 1:06 pm:
Well, i do  not know if i caught the right message from this poem, but i'll give it a try. I think the poem was steered in a religious direction,"Eternity is his power, tick tock, he has come."  telling people that time for living is winding down. This was a very refreshing poem and i hope that you continue to  inspire others through writing.
 
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