A traitorous mind

July 19, 2013
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Oh mind, listen
I am inconsolable
As I stand here, withering
And the rocks start to shake

Oh body, straighten
Even if I go, be dignified
Will I now belong to the devil?
Whose is it to determine me - myself?

Oh smile, plastered
The sea is calling me now
Temptation is there, be just
As I start to fall, I cough up mud
And I realize I'm underground.

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Pargaran said...
Nov. 24, 2013 at 3:19 pm
That was so deep... It's about suicide, correct? Nice twist at the end, I wasn't expecting it at all! Very well written, keep up the good work!
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