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Gathering flow,
Gathering kindness,
Gathering love,
To fill my heart up.
To make it beat in rhythm.
To make it pump in happiness.
So even if it punchers,
It overflows rhythmically with love and kindness.

Let me be of what I want to,
Of what I desire.
If 'No',
Then give me an answer,
Because I just want to be a dancer.

Before its too late,
Let me know.

Let me put my dancing shoes on ,
Before the music is gone,
Cause my heart will run along.

All I am asking for is just an answer,
Because all I ever wanted to be is A Dancer!



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KenzicoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 12:37 pm:
My favourite line is "Before the music is gone, Cause my heart will run along." Great job and I huess i"ll echo the rythm advice. :)
 
-namaste- replied...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 6:24 pm :
Thank u!!! N i will keep ur advice in mind!
 
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sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 23, 2013 at 11:43 am:
i really like this, but i would suggest either keeping the rhthym of the beginning of the poem, or the rhythm of the last thirteen lines. maybe consitancy us boring, but it would make it easier to follow. Great job though
 
SeiraBlyton replied...
Jul. 23, 2013 at 8:38 pm :
I really appriciate your suggestion n i will definatly work on it.... Thank you
 
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