Love:Gift and wish.

July 17, 2013
By compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.


Love is the best gift

One can ever wish

Love is the best wish

one can ever gift



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on Sep. 1 2014 at 12:12 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

It is maybe simpe, but it is also, complexed. If that is a word, but your poem has simplicity and complexity in it. You were able to put what love is in such few words, and that is such a talent. You are a very talented and wonderful person and writer. I hope you know that. Your poem is full of power, and if people complain that it's too short, then they don't know that has so much power. Your poem is absolutely beautiful and perfect. You are a wonderful person. Thank you for sharing this! ^_^

on Jul. 28 2014 at 11:51 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

That is simple but so TRUE. It says it all ^_^

on Mar. 19 2014 at 10:46 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

So simple! So impressive! So elegant! So perfect! 

on Jan. 16 2014 at 7:17 am
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

Simple and elgant very good :) i love your flow

on Nov. 16 2013 at 11:23 am
poohbearpoelala, Scar, Other
0 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live everyday like it is your last

So simple, yet so beautiful! Well done:D

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:29 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

So simple, So true, So beautiful...

on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:25 am
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

Simple=Perfection <3

on Oct. 23 2013 at 1:18 pm
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Yes, i meant the repetition. Thats the strength. Thank you for your nice words. Glad you liked it :)

on Oct. 23 2013 at 1:08 pm
boundlesswildflower SILVER, Minneapolis, Minnesota
8 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some infinities are bigger than other infinities." - faults in our stars by John Green

Wow i love the simplicity but deep meaning for it!! Plus the organization is great, did you mean for the beginning words to have such meaning repetetively, love and one? If so amazing job!! Love = gift + one + wish" theory. :)

on Aug. 30 2013 at 2:58 pm
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don't always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

You are so welcome! (:

on Aug. 30 2013 at 5:51 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Thank you so much for the comment.  True what you said.

on Aug. 6 2013 at 10:23 am
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don't always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

This was really good and true and shows that you don't have to write a lot with detail but you can easily just pick and choose a few words to express your feelings and it's fine.

on Jul. 28 2013 at 4:29 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Your comment made my day. Thank you so much :)

on Jul. 28 2013 at 4:23 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Aww thanks a lot for your beautiful comment :)

on Jul. 26 2013 at 10:08 am
write118118 SILVER, London, Other
8 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
'beginning today, treat everyone you meet as if they will be dead by midnight' Og Mandino

That was beautiful! Really shows length is not everything and 5 words can say more than 500! brilliant! xxx

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 26 2013 at 9:21 am
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

Im gonna say that was the best and shortest poem i ever read! haha good job.


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