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A Rainy Day

June 28, 2013
By sago2212 SILVER, Lucknow, Other
sago2212 SILVER, Lucknow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
hate is a strong word


The school was off late
and as I stepped out
could feel the Showers of Blessings
falling from heaven above;
which increased in volume
by each passing minute
and it made me wait
for the cab for long
but couldn’t find any
And so
I called upon my coachman
to bring the auto
till a nearby cafe
where I sipped coffee
which allowed me
to enjoy the Rain.


The author's comments:
After reading the poem My Mother At Sixty-Six written by Kamala Das; I was inspired to write a poem as one sentence.

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on Jul. 13 2013 at 12:42 am
sago2212 SILVER, Lucknow, Other
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hate is a strong word

thanku so much for ur motivation *SMILES*

on Jul. 12 2013 at 5:48 pm
jfsdifdisofnsdklvn BRONZE, Hanahan, South Carolina
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I LOVE the continuous breath method of poetry as aformentioned in My Mother at Sixty-Six. You used it well, and it flowed effortlessly. I also loved the way you capitalized certain words as to make them appear proper nouns instead of improper. Well done. :)