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I am told what I am
A painter, no more
One who colours the world
With the madness of Thor

I am told what to do
It is advise that I seek
Yet I feel I'm not myself
My transformation - incomplete

I yearn for your words
Of wisdom, so true
But I feel that it hurts
All I want to know is who?

What must I do
To figure out my life
For everything I know
Is all lost in strife

As for now I must sit and wait
And hope for the best
That my life will gather pace
And my treasonous thoughts - rest




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PargaranThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:24 pm:
I like how you used Thor as an image of madness. Very well done!
 
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InfamouslyFamousThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 1:54 pm:
The flow of the poem is clever. I like it. Beautifully written. I look forward to more of your work. The beginning is most unique. Your finish is intressante.
 
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elycavillThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
yesterday at 1:15 pm:
Hi. I like ur poem. I like the formation, how you kept it flow.But I especially the beginig it seems really strong! :)
 
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