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I am told what I am
A painter, no more
One who colours the world
With the madness of Thor

I am told what to do
It is advise that I seek
Yet I feel I'm not myself
My transformation - incomplete

I yearn for your words
Of wisdom, so true
But I feel that it hurts
All I want to know is who?

What must I do
To figure out my life
For everything I know
Is all lost in strife

As for now I must sit and wait
And hope for the best
That my life will gather pace
And my treasonous thoughts - rest





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Pargaran said...
Nov. 24, 2013 at 3:24 pm
I like how you used Thor as an image of madness. Very well done!
 
InfamouslyFamous said...
Nov. 24, 2013 at 1:54 pm
The flow of the poem is clever. I like it. Beautifully written. I look forward to more of your work. The beginning is most unique. Your finish is intressante.
 
elycavill This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 23, 2013 at 1:15 pm
Hi. I like ur poem. I like the formation, how you kept it flow.But I especially the beginig it seems really strong! :)
 
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