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Broken and used,
I stumble away,
My heart in pieces,
With nowhere to turn,
I am alone,
Abandoned,
Desolate,
Fallen.

I can plead,
I can beg,
But it will be,
Of no use,
You have left,
Me,
You have left us all,
My worth gone,
With you dead.

Tears fall,
And so does my heart,
And depression,
These Iron chains,
They weigh me down,
Until I drown,
In a sea,
An ocean of pain.



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BalladOfMonaLisaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 17 at 2:41 am:
Thank you. This one varies from my usual style of writing so I am glad it turned out well.
 
FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 9:56 am :
Lisa this is amazing, i loved the first couple lines thier the best i get chills down the spine when i read this. Strong message and a good layout makes it one of my favorites.
 
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WaistbandThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 17 at 1:49 am:
Dude, This message is so powerful that it feels like you could actually drown in your sorrow just as well. Good job  
 
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