A Cracked Window

June 24, 2013
The world is a cracked window
Time is lost and nothing remains
The view is broken
And so is the past

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TheComet said...
Jul. 10, 2014 at 8:32 pm
Short or not, It doesn't matter cuz a poem has a msg to share and i believe this poem has left an impact on everyone who read it so mission accompliched ;) Great Job 5/5 :D
HudaZavery said...
Jul. 9, 2014 at 12:50 pm
Short but effective. It left an impact. Good job!
TargonTheDragon said...
Jul. 13, 2013 at 2:12 pm
i agree with Jade. great job!
Jade.I.Am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 4, 2013 at 12:45 am
This is awesome :) short but deep. 5/5
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