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wanting

June 20, 2013
By Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou


my lips lust
to kiss
the un-kissed regions
of your body

my fingers seek
to explore
every part of you
unexplored
untouched

my body craves
for your body
to fit perfectly
into mine
nestled in my
arms
steady rhythm
to the love song
of the moon
and the lullaby
of stars

my heart desires
to be
yours and only
yours
like you are to me

but do you want
the same


The author's comments:
Admit. You have wanted the same thing one time or another. We're teens.

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 16 2013 at 5:14 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Thanks. I'm officially blushing right now. And I love s*xy poems too. (By the way, I hate the censorship on this site. For some reason, they always censor your comments. UGH. -_-) I should write more in that case. Glad I read plenty of Neruda for inspiration. Thanks again, amiga. 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 8 2013 at 3:58 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Wow, thanks. That's very flattering. 

on Jul. 4 2013 at 1:37 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

You're welcome! :D I love reading your relateable poems. They make me want to sing. And I don't sing. At all.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 2 2013 at 2:20 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I'm sorry to hear about your boyfriend, Krasota. And yeah, we all want this so badly. Thanks for admitting it. And for commenting and for taking the time to read this poem. 

on Jun. 29 2013 at 7:56 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

YES I WANT THIS. Okay, sorry I just felt a little confessional there. If that's an adjective. Great job at making me completely lovesick for my boyfriend right now. :D

migwam ELITE said...
on Jun. 25 2013 at 1:06 pm
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
240 articles 20 photos 152 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present." --Marcus Aurelius

Heavens, there is nothing I love more than a good old fashioned sexy poem. Always the best. Exquisite work, my friend.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jun. 24 2013 at 5:47 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Thanks, Lexus. It is a lot like Besos, isn't it? And fleshy too. The third staza is my favorite too. I think I worked on capturing what my mind envisioned the most. And thank you. Means a lot to me. 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jun. 24 2013 at 5:43 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Yes, yes, we do. Thanks. ^u^

on Jun. 24 2013 at 3:49 am
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Guess who? Well well well.. this reminded me of Besos quite a bit. Dexterous! I loved the ending, hmm. The more I read the better it gets. I 'want' to keep reading! It's so um, fleshy? Yeah, we'll go with that. The third stanza is beautiful near the end, just like a song. I really like the whole thing. And I liked the freeness of no puncuation.

Niquel said...
on Jun. 23 2013 at 10:05 pm
Niquel, Lipan, Texas
0 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you don't design your own plan, you'll fall into someone else's plan. And guess what they have planned for you? Not much.

-Jim Rohn

Alright, alright... I admit. After all, we are teens. Teens want some crazy sh*t..


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